Carrick Capital · Creative

Carmela · CC5

One pod a day — build its cards top to bottom. The rotation means you and the other buyer never run the same pod on the same day, and you cycle every pod by Friday. Graded on lead value & tier, not volume.

30 builds · Mon–Fri 6 / day · 4 static · 2 video Carrick Capital | #5 Grade: value / tier

Your week

Tier A is craft over volume — this is deliberately below Fred's 10/day. Every card is copy-constant: for statics the Layout is the only variable, for videos the Format is. That's how Week 2 learns what actually won.

BuyerMonTueWedThuFri
John · CC3P1P2P1P2P3
Carmela · CC5P2P1P3P1P2

P1 Identity & Authority · P2 Mechanism & Trust · P3 Product & Proof

Campaign Name = the card's ID. Every single build. It's how results map back to the hook — the first Copy button on every card is that name. The dark chip on each card is its predicted hook score, recorded before launch; Week 1 is testing whether that prediction holds.
Compliance — non-negotiable. Carrick is a credit broker, not a lender: lenders decide, never "we funded / we refinanced". Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved", "guaranteed", or "whole-of-market" (Carrick has a 50+ lender panel). Cards tagged reg #1 · illustrative must ship the disclaimer at the end of the primary text. Copy as written — no edits after approval.
Mon4 static · 2 videoP2 · Mechanism & Trust
CW1-MT-S01-L1Sreg #1 · illustrative100P2-H01 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-MT-S01
Why this cell: Full formula. SAFEST of the P2 100s — no absolute market claim, no competitor-behaviour specifics. Shares body B2 with H02 + H04.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: E Stat-LedAngle picker: Us vs ThemCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-S01-L1
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: Never a lender name. Never a reason. My accountant asked both in one call.
SUPPORT: Your details go to the panel. Not to a list.
CTA TEXT: Ask us the three questions

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Most commercial finance "brokers" are lead generators with a lender login. Your details get sold, your phone doesn't stop, and nobody names the lender. A real broker does the opposite and can prove it: we'll tell you which lenders on the panel of 50+ we approached, which one we're recommending, and why — in writing, before you commit to anything. We're paid by the lender if you complete, never by you. First check leaves no mark on your file.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-MT-S01-L2Sreg #1 · illustrative100P2-H01 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-MT-S01
Why this cell: Full formula. SAFEST of the P2 100s — no absolute market claim, no competitor-behaviour specifics. Shares body B2 with H02 + H04.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: H ComparisonAngle picker: Us vs ThemCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-S01-L2
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: Never a lender name. Never a reason. My accountant asked both in one call.
SUPPORT: Your details go to the panel. Not to a list.
CTA TEXT: Ask us the three questions

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Most commercial finance "brokers" are lead generators with a lender login. Your details get sold, your phone doesn't stop, and nobody names the lender. A real broker does the opposite and can prove it: we'll tell you which lenders on the panel of 50+ we approached, which one we're recommending, and why — in writing, before you commit to anything. We're paid by the lender if you complete, never by you. First check leaves no mark on your file.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-MT-S01-L3Sreg #1 · illustrative100P2-H01 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-MT-S01
Why this cell: Full formula. SAFEST of the P2 100s — no absolute market claim, no competitor-behaviour specifics. Shares body B2 with H02 + H04.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: O Process StepsAngle picker: Us vs ThemCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-S01-L3
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: Never a lender name. Never a reason. My accountant asked both in one call.
SUPPORT: Your details go to the panel. Not to a list.
CTA TEXT: Ask us the three questions

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Most commercial finance "brokers" are lead generators with a lender login. Your details get sold, your phone doesn't stop, and nobody names the lender. A real broker does the opposite and can prove it: we'll tell you which lenders on the panel of 50+ we approached, which one we're recommending, and why — in writing, before you commit to anything. We're paid by the lender if you complete, never by you. First check leaves no mark on your file.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-MT-S01-L4Sreg #1 · illustrative100P2-H01 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-MT-S01
Why this cell: Full formula. SAFEST of the P2 100s — no absolute market claim, no competitor-behaviour specifics. Shares body B2 with H02 + H04.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: Y Claim CalloutAngle picker: Us vs ThemCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-S01-L4
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: Never a lender name. Never a reason. My accountant asked both in one call.
SUPPORT: Your details go to the panel. Not to a list.
CTA TEXT: Ask us the three questions

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Most commercial finance "brokers" are lead generators with a lender login. Your details get sold, your phone doesn't stop, and nobody names the lender. A real broker does the opposite and can prove it: we'll tell you which lenders on the panel of 50+ we approached, which one we're recommending, and why — in writing, before you commit to anything. We're paid by the lender if you complete, never by you. First check leaves no mark on your file.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-MT-V01-F1Vreg #1 · illustrative90P2-H05 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-MT-V01
Why this cell: Promoted from the scored P2 batch (90). Video concept.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Base: ProfessionalFormat: Voiceover + B-RollMood: DryAccent: Strong BritishAspect: 9:16
Opening Hook (2s) → Export step
Nobody would name their panel.
0.0s VISUAL: Close on a phone screen — a call log, four names, all "Broker". Thumb scrolls. (already scrolling) AUDIO: "I called four. Nobody would name a single lender." TEXT: "Nobody would name their panel." ~1.0s VISUAL: Cut — an email opening on a laptop. A list. Actual lender names, legible for a beat. AUDIO: "One sent the list. Unprompted." ~2.0s EVOLVE VISUAL: Push in on the list. TEXT: → "50+ lenders · named before you commit" 3.0s HANDOFF VISUAL: Laptop closes. AUDIO: "That's the whole test. Ask them who's on the panel."
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-V01-F1
Script (Paste Own) → Script step
Before you use any commercial finance broker, ask three questions. Who is on your panel — by name. How are you paid, and by whom. And which lenders did you actually approach for me. Most will struggle with the second one. We'll answer all three in writing before you commit to anything: paid by the lender when you complete, never by you, and the same either way. The first check leaves no mark on your file.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]
CW1-MT-V01-F2Vreg #1 · illustrative90P2-H05 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-MT-V01
Why this cell: Promoted from the scored P2 batch (90). Video concept.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Base: ProfessionalFormat: Solo SelfieMood: DryAccent: Strong BritishAspect: 9:16
Opening Hook (2s) → Export step
Nobody would name their panel.
→ Same hook + script as CW1-MT-V01-F1, produced as Solo Selfie. Reuse the beats — the format is the variable.
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-V01-F2
Script (Paste Own) → Script step
Before you use any commercial finance broker, ask three questions. Who is on your panel — by name. How are you paid, and by whom. And which lenders did you actually approach for me. Most will struggle with the second one. We'll answer all three in writing before you commit to anything: paid by the lender when you complete, never by you, and the same either way. The first check leaves no mark on your file.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]
Tue4 static · 2 videoP1 · Identity & Authority
CW1-ID-S02-L1Sreg #1 · illustrative88P1-H03 · BCheck · 0/5CW1-ID-S02
Why this cell: ISOLATES OUTCOME-VISIBLE. Stem-matched to H01 minus the resolution. Same body B1.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: E Stat-LedAngle picker: Problem-SolutionCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-S02-L1
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My overdraft never moved in three years. Nobody at the bank could say why.
SUPPORT: The policy didn't fail. It was never yours.
CTA TEXT: See which lenders fit

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
The bank isn't broken. It's just not built for you anymore. A high-street lending policy is written for the average of thousands of businesses — which means it fits almost none of them precisely, and a growing one worst of all. Nine years of trading, a real payroll and filed accounts don't move a policy. They do move a lender whose appetite happens to match. Finding which one is the entire job. No mark on your file to find out, and the lenders make the final call.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-ID-S02-L2Sreg #1 · illustrative88P1-H03 · BCheck · 0/5CW1-ID-S02
Why this cell: ISOLATES OUTCOME-VISIBLE. Stem-matched to H01 minus the resolution. Same body B1.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: H ComparisonAngle picker: Problem-SolutionCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-S02-L2
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My overdraft never moved in three years. Nobody at the bank could say why.
SUPPORT: The policy didn't fail. It was never yours.
CTA TEXT: See which lenders fit

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
The bank isn't broken. It's just not built for you anymore. A high-street lending policy is written for the average of thousands of businesses — which means it fits almost none of them precisely, and a growing one worst of all. Nine years of trading, a real payroll and filed accounts don't move a policy. They do move a lender whose appetite happens to match. Finding which one is the entire job. No mark on your file to find out, and the lenders make the final call.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-ID-S02-L3Sreg #1 · illustrative88P1-H03 · BCheck · 0/5CW1-ID-S02
Why this cell: ISOLATES OUTCOME-VISIBLE. Stem-matched to H01 minus the resolution. Same body B1.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: O Process StepsAngle picker: Problem-SolutionCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-S02-L3
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My overdraft never moved in three years. Nobody at the bank could say why.
SUPPORT: The policy didn't fail. It was never yours.
CTA TEXT: See which lenders fit

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
The bank isn't broken. It's just not built for you anymore. A high-street lending policy is written for the average of thousands of businesses — which means it fits almost none of them precisely, and a growing one worst of all. Nine years of trading, a real payroll and filed accounts don't move a policy. They do move a lender whose appetite happens to match. Finding which one is the entire job. No mark on your file to find out, and the lenders make the final call.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-ID-S02-L4Sreg #1 · illustrative88P1-H03 · BCheck · 0/5CW1-ID-S02
Why this cell: ISOLATES OUTCOME-VISIBLE. Stem-matched to H01 minus the resolution. Same body B1.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: Y Claim CalloutAngle picker: Problem-SolutionCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-S02-L4
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My overdraft never moved in three years. Nobody at the bank could say why.
SUPPORT: The policy didn't fail. It was never yours.
CTA TEXT: See which lenders fit

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
The bank isn't broken. It's just not built for you anymore. A high-street lending policy is written for the average of thousands of businesses — which means it fits almost none of them precisely, and a growing one worst of all. Nine years of trading, a real payroll and filed accounts don't move a policy. They do move a lender whose appetite happens to match. Finding which one is the entire job. No mark on your file to find out, and the lenders make the final call.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-ID-V02-F1Vreg #1 · illustrative90⚡ interruptP1-H05 · C2Check · 0/5CW1-ID-V02
Why this cell: Isolates STAKES COUNT (1 neg word vs H01/H02's 2). VISUAL HOOK = pattern-interrupt (absurdist literalisation, person in shot). Paired against the register-consistent opens on P1-H04 / P2-H05 / P3-H03.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Base: UGC/SelfieFormat: Voiceover + B-RollMood: DeadpanAccent: Strong BritishAspect: 9:16
Visual hook — A — Pattern-interrupt action · person in shot
Connective: He presses a VISITOR sticker onto his own lapel → because → nine years a customer and the bank still treats him as a stranger.
Opening Hook (2s) → Export step
Nine years. Still a stranger.
0.0s VISUAL: Tight on a man's chest and hands — work jacket, no tie. He is ALREADY peeling a "VISITOR" sticker off its backing and pressing it flat to his lapel. Face half in frame, entirely unbothered. (already peeling — do NOT film the pick-up) AUDIO: "Nine years trading. Twenty-two on payroll." TEXT: "Nine years. Still a stranger." [SFX: crisp sticker peel] ~1.0s VISUAL: He glances down at it. Tugs the corner. DOESN'T take it off. Camera drifts up to his face — this is normal to him now. AUDIO: "Nobody at the bank knows my name. They know my risk band." ~2.0s EVOLVE VISUAL: Snap cut — he peels the sticker off and drops it. Behind him: HIS OWN unit. Staff, kit, work happening. TEXT: → "The bank reads a score. A lender reads a business." 3.0s HANDOFF VISUAL: Small shrug, no bitterness. AUDIO: "So we stopped asking them first."
Shooting notes. A roll of VISITOR stickers costs £4. The lapel press must be in motion at frame one. Shoot 0–2s in a plain corridor, then cut to HIS floor for the evolution — the contrast between "visitor" and "this is my building" IS the hook. No bank branding anywhere. Mute test: the word VISITOR does the entire job silently.
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-V02-F1
Script (Paste Own) → Script step
Twenty-two people whose wages depend on decisions I make about cash flow. Nine years of filed accounts. And the bank still reviews the overdraft like it's a first application — because it's reading a policy, not a business. A lender on the panel read the same numbers and came back differently. Nothing about the business had changed. Just who was reading it. Free to check, no mark on your file, and the lenders decide.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]
CW1-ID-V02-F2Vreg #1 · illustrative90⚡ interruptP1-H05 · C2Check · 0/5CW1-ID-V02
Why this cell: Isolates STAKES COUNT (1 neg word vs H01/H02's 2). VISUAL HOOK = pattern-interrupt (absurdist literalisation, person in shot). Paired against the register-consistent opens on P1-H04 / P2-H05 / P3-H03.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Base: UGC/SelfieFormat: Solo SelfieMood: DeadpanAccent: Strong BritishAspect: 9:16
Visual hook — A — Pattern-interrupt action · person in shot
Connective: He presses a VISITOR sticker onto his own lapel → because → nine years a customer and the bank still treats him as a stranger.
Opening Hook (2s) → Export step
Nine years. Still a stranger.
→ Same hook + script as CW1-ID-V02-F1, produced as Solo Selfie. Reuse the beats — the format is the variable.
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-V02-F2
Script (Paste Own) → Script step
Twenty-two people whose wages depend on decisions I make about cash flow. Nine years of filed accounts. And the bank still reviews the overdraft like it's a first application — because it's reading a policy, not a business. A lender on the panel read the same numbers and came back differently. Nothing about the business had changed. Just who was reading it. Free to check, no mark on your file, and the lenders decide.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]
Wed4 static · 2 videoP3 · Product & Proof
CW1-PP-S01-L1Sreg #1 · illustrative100P3-H01 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-PP-S01
Why this cell: Full formula at MOF on the refinance angle. Shares body B3 with H04 — hook is the only variable.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: E Stat-LedAngle picker: Problem-SolutionCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-PP-S01-L1
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My facility never fit the business. Nobody flagged it for three years. A lender restructured it.
SUPPORT: Outgrowing your facility isn't a mistake. It's arithmetic.
CTA TEXT: Have the panel review it

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Most established businesses are carrying at least one facility that made sense when they signed it and doesn't now. That's not a reflection on how the business is run — it's what happens when you grow faster than your finance does. The facility that suited £600k doesn't suit £2m, and nobody rings to tell you. If the repayments are making your operational decisions, the structure is running the business. Reviewing it costs nothing and leaves no mark on your credit file. Lenders decide; we make sure more than one looks.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-PP-S01-L2Sreg #1 · illustrative100P3-H01 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-PP-S01
Why this cell: Full formula at MOF on the refinance angle. Shares body B3 with H04 — hook is the only variable.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: H ComparisonAngle picker: Problem-SolutionCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-PP-S01-L2
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My facility never fit the business. Nobody flagged it for three years. A lender restructured it.
SUPPORT: Outgrowing your facility isn't a mistake. It's arithmetic.
CTA TEXT: Have the panel review it

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Most established businesses are carrying at least one facility that made sense when they signed it and doesn't now. That's not a reflection on how the business is run — it's what happens when you grow faster than your finance does. The facility that suited £600k doesn't suit £2m, and nobody rings to tell you. If the repayments are making your operational decisions, the structure is running the business. Reviewing it costs nothing and leaves no mark on your credit file. Lenders decide; we make sure more than one looks.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-PP-S01-L3Sreg #1 · illustrative100P3-H01 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-PP-S01
Why this cell: Full formula at MOF on the refinance angle. Shares body B3 with H04 — hook is the only variable.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: O Process StepsAngle picker: Problem-SolutionCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-PP-S01-L3
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My facility never fit the business. Nobody flagged it for three years. A lender restructured it.
SUPPORT: Outgrowing your facility isn't a mistake. It's arithmetic.
CTA TEXT: Have the panel review it

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Most established businesses are carrying at least one facility that made sense when they signed it and doesn't now. That's not a reflection on how the business is run — it's what happens when you grow faster than your finance does. The facility that suited £600k doesn't suit £2m, and nobody rings to tell you. If the repayments are making your operational decisions, the structure is running the business. Reviewing it costs nothing and leaves no mark on your credit file. Lenders decide; we make sure more than one looks.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-PP-S01-L4Sreg #1 · illustrative100P3-H01 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-PP-S01
Why this cell: Full formula at MOF on the refinance angle. Shares body B3 with H04 — hook is the only variable.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: Y Claim CalloutAngle picker: Problem-SolutionCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-PP-S01-L4
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My facility never fit the business. Nobody flagged it for three years. A lender restructured it.
SUPPORT: Outgrowing your facility isn't a mistake. It's arithmetic.
CTA TEXT: Have the panel review it

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Most established businesses are carrying at least one facility that made sense when they signed it and doesn't now. That's not a reflection on how the business is run — it's what happens when you grow faster than your finance does. The facility that suited £600k doesn't suit £2m, and nobody rings to tell you. If the repayments are making your operational decisions, the structure is running the business. Reviewing it costs nothing and leaves no mark on your credit file. Lenders decide; we make sure more than one looks.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-PP-V01-F1Vreg #1 · illustrative100⚡ interruptP3-H02 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-PP-V01
Why this cell: Full formula, DIFFERENT stakes vocabulary (stuck/wrong vs never/nobody) — guards against the 100 being an artefact of one word pair. VISUAL HOOK = pattern-interrupt (absurdist literalisation, person in shot): he tears, and NOTHING CHANGES — the inversion is the joke.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Base: CinemaFormat: Voiceover + B-RollMood: DeadpanAccent: Strong BritishAspect: 9:16
Visual hook — A — Pattern-interrupt action · person in shot
Connective: He tears off calendar pages and it is January every time → because → the repayment has been the same number every month for three years.
Opening Hook (2s) → Export step
Stuck. For three years.
0.0s VISUAL: Close on a wall calendar, a man's hand ALREADY tearing a page off. Underneath: JANUARY. He tears again. JANUARY. Again. JANUARY. He is in frame, deadpan, going faster. AUDIO: "Same number. Every month." TEXT: "Stuck. For three years." [SFX: three fast paper tears] ~1.0s VISUAL: Torn pages piling at his feet. He stops. Looks at camera. The calendar STILL says JANUARY. AUDIO: "For three years." ~2.0s EVOLVE VISUAL: Snap cut — the repayment schedule on a desk, the same figure repeated down the page, his finger tracking it. TEXT: → "Reviewed by 50+ lenders · no mark on your file" 3.0s HANDOFF VISUAL: AUDIO: "The cash wasn't gone. It was stuck in the wrong facility."
Shooting notes. Print ~10 identical JANUARY pages and staple them into a cheap calendar block. The tear must be underway at frame one. THE DEADPAN IS THE JOKE — he is not frustrated, he is used to it. Let the pages pile in shot; that pile IS the three years.
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-PP-V01-F1
Script (Paste Own) → Script step
When the repayment schedule is making your operational decisions, the facility is running the business — not you. That's not a judgement on how it's run. It's just what happens when you grow faster than your finance does. A properly structured refinance puts the decisions back where they belong. Reviewing it costs nothing and leaves no mark on your credit file. Lenders decide; we make sure more than one looks. Subject to lender approval.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]
CW1-PP-V01-F2Vreg #1 · illustrative100⚡ interruptP3-H02 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-PP-V01
Why this cell: Full formula, DIFFERENT stakes vocabulary (stuck/wrong vs never/nobody) — guards against the 100 being an artefact of one word pair. VISUAL HOOK = pattern-interrupt (absurdist literalisation, person in shot): he tears, and NOTHING CHANGES — the inversion is the joke.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Base: CinemaFormat: Solo SelfieMood: DeadpanAccent: Strong BritishAspect: 9:16
Visual hook — A — Pattern-interrupt action · person in shot
Connective: He tears off calendar pages and it is January every time → because → the repayment has been the same number every month for three years.
Opening Hook (2s) → Export step
Stuck. For three years.
→ Same hook + script as CW1-PP-V01-F1, produced as Solo Selfie. Reuse the beats — the format is the variable.
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-PP-V01-F2
Script (Paste Own) → Script step
When the repayment schedule is making your operational decisions, the facility is running the business — not you. That's not a judgement on how it's run. It's just what happens when you grow faster than your finance does. A properly structured refinance puts the decisions back where they belong. Reviewing it costs nothing and leaves no mark on your credit file. Lenders decide; we make sure more than one looks. Subject to lender approval.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]
Thu4 static · 2 videoP1 · Identity & Authority
CW1-ID-S04-L1Sreg #1 · illustrative100P1-H02 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-ID-S04
Why this cell: Full formula, different sentence shape (third-party-referral framing) — guards against A being one lucky structure.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: V Annotated ChecklistAngle picker: StorytellingCTA Approach: CuriosityCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-S04-L1
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My accountant said stop. Nobody had flagged the facility in three years. A lender restructured it.
SUPPORT: The person who spotted it didn't work at the bank.
CTA TEXT: See what a second reader finds

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Nobody at the bank flags a facility that no longer fits. It isn't their job, and the person who used to do it left in 2019. So it sits there — sized for the business you were, quietly making decisions for the business you are. It took an accountant ten minutes to see it and a lender on the panel to fix it. If nobody has reviewed yours in three years, that's not unusual. It's just expensive. No mark on your file to check; the lender makes the call.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-ID-S04-L2Sreg #1 · illustrative100P1-H02 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-ID-S04
Why this cell: Full formula, different sentence shape (third-party-referral framing) — guards against A being one lucky structure.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: I Scene NarrativeAngle picker: StorytellingCTA Approach: CuriosityCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-S04-L2
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My accountant said stop. Nobody had flagged the facility in three years. A lender restructured it.
SUPPORT: The person who spotted it didn't work at the bank.
CTA TEXT: See what a second reader finds

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Nobody at the bank flags a facility that no longer fits. It isn't their job, and the person who used to do it left in 2019. So it sits there — sized for the business you were, quietly making decisions for the business you are. It took an accountant ten minutes to see it and a lender on the panel to fix it. If nobody has reviewed yours in three years, that's not unusual. It's just expensive. No mark on your file to check; the lender makes the call.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-ID-S04-L3Sreg #1 · illustrative100P1-H02 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-ID-S04
Why this cell: Full formula, different sentence shape (third-party-referral framing) — guards against A being one lucky structure.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: E Stat-LedAngle picker: StorytellingCTA Approach: CuriosityCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-S04-L3
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My accountant said stop. Nobody had flagged the facility in three years. A lender restructured it.
SUPPORT: The person who spotted it didn't work at the bank.
CTA TEXT: See what a second reader finds

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Nobody at the bank flags a facility that no longer fits. It isn't their job, and the person who used to do it left in 2019. So it sits there — sized for the business you were, quietly making decisions for the business you are. It took an accountant ten minutes to see it and a lender on the panel to fix it. If nobody has reviewed yours in three years, that's not unusual. It's just expensive. No mark on your file to check; the lender makes the call.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-ID-S04-L4Sreg #1 · illustrative100P1-H02 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-ID-S04
Why this cell: Full formula, different sentence shape (third-party-referral framing) — guards against A being one lucky structure.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: S BrandAngle picker: StorytellingCTA Approach: CuriosityCopy Length: MediumConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-S04-L4
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: My accountant said stop. Nobody had flagged the facility in three years. A lender restructured it.
SUPPORT: The person who spotted it didn't work at the bank.
CTA TEXT: See what a second reader finds

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Nobody at the bank flags a facility that no longer fits. It isn't their job, and the person who used to do it left in 2019. So it sits there — sized for the business you were, quietly making decisions for the business you are. It took an accountant ten minutes to see it and a lender on the panel to fix it. If nobody has reviewed yours in three years, that's not unusual. It's just expensive. No mark on your file to check; the lender makes the call.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-ID-V02-F3Vreg #1 · illustrative90⚡ interruptP1-H05 · C2Check · 0/5CW1-ID-V02
Why this cell: Isolates STAKES COUNT (1 neg word vs H01/H02's 2). VISUAL HOOK = pattern-interrupt (absurdist literalisation, person in shot). Paired against the register-consistent opens on P1-H04 / P2-H05 / P3-H03.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Base: UGC/SelfieFormat: Text + B-RollMood: DeadpanAccent: Strong BritishAspect: 9:16
Visual hook — A — Pattern-interrupt action · person in shot
Connective: He presses a VISITOR sticker onto his own lapel → because → nine years a customer and the bank still treats him as a stranger.
Opening Hook (2s) → Export step
Nine years. Still a stranger.
→ Same hook + script as CW1-ID-V02-F1, produced as Text + B-Roll. Reuse the beats — the format is the variable.
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-V02-F3
Text cards → Layout step
Twenty-two people whose wages depend on decisions I make about cash flow. Nine years of filed accounts. And the bank still reviews the overdraft like it's a first application — because it's reading a policy, not a business. A lender on the panel read the same numbers and came back differently. Nothing about the business had changed. Just who was reading it. Free to check, no mark on your file, and the lenders decide.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]
CW1-ID-V02-F4Vreg #1 · illustrative90⚡ interruptP1-H05 · C2Check · 0/5CW1-ID-V02
Why this cell: Isolates STAKES COUNT (1 neg word vs H01/H02's 2). VISUAL HOOK = pattern-interrupt (absurdist literalisation, person in shot). Paired against the register-consistent opens on P1-H04 / P2-H05 / P3-H03.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Base: UGC/SelfieFormat: Green Screen (Commentary Overlay)Mood: DeadpanAccent: Strong BritishAspect: 9:16
Visual hook — A — Pattern-interrupt action · person in shot
Connective: He presses a VISITOR sticker onto his own lapel → because → nine years a customer and the bank still treats him as a stranger.
Opening Hook (2s) → Export step
Nine years. Still a stranger.
→ Same hook + script as CW1-ID-V02-F1, produced as Green Screen (Commentary Overlay). Reuse the beats — the format is the variable.
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-ID-V02-F4
Script (Paste Own) → Script step
Twenty-two people whose wages depend on decisions I make about cash flow. Nine years of filed accounts. And the bank still reviews the overdraft like it's a first application — because it's reading a policy, not a business. A lender on the panel read the same numbers and came back differently. Nothing about the business had changed. Just who was reading it. Free to check, no mark on your file, and the lenders decide.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]
Fri4 static · 2 videoP2 · Mechanism & Trust
CW1-MT-S04-L1Sreg #1 · illustrative90P2-H03 · C2Check · 0/5CW1-MT-S04
Why this cell: Isolates STAKES COUNT (1 neg word). Commission disclosure is genuinely Carrick's mechanism and is provable about Carrick itself.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: V Annotated ChecklistAngle picker: Direct AddressCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: ShortConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-S04-L1
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: Nobody disclosed my broker's commission. Not once in three years. The lender paid it anyway.
SUPPORT: We'll put the number in writing before you commit.
CTA TEXT: See how we get paid

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Somebody was always being paid. Nobody ever said who, or how much. That's the part of the broker model that quietly does the damage — not the fee itself, but the fact you had to guess. We're paid by the lender when your facility completes. You pay us nothing, ever. We'll tell you the figure, when it's paid, and confirm it's the same regardless of which lender we recommend — in writing, before you commit. A broker who won't tell you how they're paid shouldn't be advising you on which lender to use.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-MT-S04-L2Sreg #1 · illustrative90P2-H03 · C2Check · 0/5CW1-MT-S04
Why this cell: Isolates STAKES COUNT (1 neg word). Commission disclosure is genuinely Carrick's mechanism and is provable about Carrick itself.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: I Scene NarrativeAngle picker: Direct AddressCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: ShortConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-S04-L2
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: Nobody disclosed my broker's commission. Not once in three years. The lender paid it anyway.
SUPPORT: We'll put the number in writing before you commit.
CTA TEXT: See how we get paid

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Somebody was always being paid. Nobody ever said who, or how much. That's the part of the broker model that quietly does the damage — not the fee itself, but the fact you had to guess. We're paid by the lender when your facility completes. You pay us nothing, ever. We'll tell you the figure, when it's paid, and confirm it's the same regardless of which lender we recommend — in writing, before you commit. A broker who won't tell you how they're paid shouldn't be advising you on which lender to use.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-MT-S04-L3Sreg #1 · illustrative90P2-H03 · C2Check · 0/5CW1-MT-S04
Why this cell: Isolates STAKES COUNT (1 neg word). Commission disclosure is genuinely Carrick's mechanism and is provable about Carrick itself.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: E Stat-LedAngle picker: Direct AddressCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: ShortConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-S04-L3
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: Nobody disclosed my broker's commission. Not once in three years. The lender paid it anyway.
SUPPORT: We'll put the number in writing before you commit.
CTA TEXT: See how we get paid

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Somebody was always being paid. Nobody ever said who, or how much. That's the part of the broker model that quietly does the damage — not the fee itself, but the fact you had to guess. We're paid by the lender when your facility completes. You pay us nothing, ever. We'll tell you the figure, when it's paid, and confirm it's the same regardless of which lender we recommend — in writing, before you commit. A broker who won't tell you how they're paid shouldn't be advising you on which lender to use.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-MT-S04-L4Sreg #1 · illustrative90P2-H03 · C2Check · 0/5CW1-MT-S04
Why this cell: Isolates STAKES COUNT (1 neg word). Commission disclosure is genuinely Carrick's mechanism and is provable about Carrick itself.
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Model: Nano Banana ProLayout: S BrandAngle picker: Direct AddressCTA Approach: DirectCopy Length: ShortConcepts: 5Sizes: All · 2K
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-S04-L4
Ad brief → Strategy box
HEADLINE: Nobody disclosed my broker's commission. Not once in three years. The lender paid it anyway.
SUPPORT: We'll put the number in writing before you commit.
CTA TEXT: See how we get paid

PRIMARY TEXT (caption):
Somebody was always being paid. Nobody ever said who, or how much. That's the part of the broker model that quietly does the damage — not the fee itself, but the fact you had to guess. We're paid by the lender when your facility completes. You pay us nothing, ever. We'll tell you the figure, when it's paid, and confirm it's the same regardless of which lender we recommend — in writing, before you commit. A broker who won't tell you how they're paid shouldn't be advising you on which lender to use.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Use this copy as written — do not reword. Broker framing: LENDERS decide, Carrick never lends. Soft check only — "no mark on your file", never "no credit check". Never "pre-approved" / "guaranteed" / "whole-of-market".
CW1-MT-V02-F3Vreg #1 · illustrative88⚡ interruptP2-H06 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-MT-V02
Why this cell: Promoted from the scored P2 batch (88). VISUAL HOOK = pattern-interrupt (absurdist literalisation, person in shot).
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Base: CinemaFormat: Text + B-RollMood: DeadpanAccent: Strong BritishAspect: 9:16
Visual hook — C/G — Environment + narrative cold open · person in shot
Connective: He deals copies of his accounts into twelve empty chairs → because → he was told it "went to the panel" and nobody could name a single reader.
Opening Hook (2s) → Export step
Who has actually seen these?
→ Same hook + script as CW1-MT-V02-F1, produced as Text + B-Roll. Reuse the beats — the format is the variable.
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-V02-F3
Text cards → Layout step
There's a difference between a broker and a forwarding address. One reads your accounts, picks the lenders whose appetite fits, and tells you why. The other sells your details and hopes. You can tell them apart with one question: name the lenders you approached for me. We'll do it in writing, before you commit. Paid by the lender, never by you. No mark on your file to start, and the lenders make the decision.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]
CW1-MT-V02-F4Vreg #1 · illustrative88⚡ interruptP2-H06 · ACheck · 0/5CW1-MT-V02
Why this cell: Promoted from the scored P2 batch (88). VISUAL HOOK = pattern-interrupt (absurdist literalisation, person in shot).
30-second pre-launch check — all 5 before it can go Live
Any box fails → it doesn't launch. Send it back.
Base: CinemaFormat: Green Screen (Commentary Overlay)Mood: DeadpanAccent: Strong BritishAspect: 9:16
Visual hook — C/G — Environment + narrative cold open · person in shot
Connective: He deals copies of his accounts into twelve empty chairs → because → he was told it "went to the panel" and nobody could name a single reader.
Opening Hook (2s) → Export step
Who has actually seen these?
→ Same hook + script as CW1-MT-V02-F1, produced as Green Screen (Commentary Overlay). Reuse the beats — the format is the variable.
Campaign Name → name field
CW1-MT-V02-F4
Script (Paste Own) → Script step
There's a difference between a broker and a forwarding address. One reads your accounts, picks the lenders whose appetite fits, and tells you why. The other sells your details and hopes. You can tell them apart with one question: name the lenders you approached for me. We'll do it in writing, before you commit. Paid by the lender, never by you. No mark on your file to start, and the lenders make the decision.

[ILLUSTRATIVE SCENARIO — not a documented customer.]

Carrick Capital · Week 1 Build Guide · Carmela · generated from _carrick_w1_config.mjs